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Falling like the autumn leaves,
Gracefully to the ground.
My nervous chest pounds and heaves,
And my cheeks flush red.

You were the breeze that picked me up,
And threw me through the air,
Sending me spiraling and spinning around,
Although you never said you'd play fair.
Soaring through this uplifting high,
Changing hues at your smile,
Dizzying spins throw me around.
My composure's now abandoned me,
It's been gone for awhile.

My crimson heart floats through the sky,
Propelled by the autumn breeze,
Plunging through the crisp, clear sky,
Not making a single sound

One question haunts my weary mind.
"Will you catch me before I hit the ground?
Or will I end up like the rest,
Dead and shriveled on this cold autumn ground?"
You blow me around like an autumn leaf...

Well actually i just LOVE this season, soooo at a painful 2:30 am i decided to write something so voila. Hope you like it!!
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cliffthetotoro Apr 29, 2012  Student Writer
I love the ending stanza. Comparing yourself to the leaves: "the rest." They are in a process of dying in autumn, while completely dead in winter.
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XxBreatheMusicxX Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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I enjoyed this very much.
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XxBreatheMusicxX Nov 15, 2011  Student Writer
AWH THANK YOU :glomp:
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very much welcome :3
gah, *is glomped*
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XxBreatheMusicxX Nov 17, 2011  Student Writer
XD tehehe
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gold-rose Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
your work is featured in my news article :aww:
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XxBreatheMusicxX Oct 2, 2011  Student Writer
OMG OMG OMG THANK YOU!!! I feel so honoured!!!!!! :tighthug: ^-^ Your news article is very beautiful too!
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XxBreatheMusicxX Sep 22, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!!! ^^ :tighthug: it means so much to me
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