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Falling like the autumn leaves,
Gracefully to the ground.
My nervous chest pounds and heaves,
And my cheeks flush red.

You were the breeze that picked me up,
And threw me through the air,
Sending me spiraling and spinning around,
Although you never said you'd play fair.
Soaring through this uplifting high,
Changing hues at your smile,
Dizzying spins throw me around.
My composure's now abandoned me,
It's been gone for awhile.

My crimson heart floats through the sky,
Propelled by the autumn breeze,
Plunging through the crisp, clear sky,
Not making a single sound

One question haunts my weary mind.
"Will you catch me before I hit the ground?
Or will I end up like the rest,
Dead and shriveled on this cold autumn ground?"
You blow me around like an autumn leaf...

Well actually i just LOVE this season, soooo at a painful 2:30 am i decided to write something so voila. Hope you like it!!
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cliffthetotoro Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student Writer
I love the ending stanza. Comparing yourself to the leaves: "the rest." They are in a process of dying in autumn, while completely dead in winter.
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XxBreatheMusicxX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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ThinkingPanda Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
I enjoyed this very much.
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XxBreatheMusicxX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Student Writer
AWH THANK YOU :glomp:
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ThinkingPanda Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
very much welcome :3
gah, *is glomped*
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XxBreatheMusicxX Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Student Writer
XD tehehe
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gold-rose Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
your work is featured in my news article :aww:
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XxBreatheMusicxX Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Student Writer
OMG OMG OMG THANK YOU!!! I feel so honoured!!!!!! :tighthug: ^-^ Your news article is very beautiful too!
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SharPhotography Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Stunning!
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XxBreatheMusicxX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!!! ^^ :tighthug: it means so much to me
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